Finishing the Never-ending Story

If you’ve been following this blog, do you ever wonder when the heck I’m going to finish my novel?

Most people are too polite to ask me. But I nevertheless have the same question every day, with every chapter and scene I write. When? WHEN? I hear about other writers having book launch parties (or other marketing occasions disguised as celebrations), and I wonder if I’ll ever get there. And that kind of questioning can be paralyzing enough to give up on this thing I’ve been working on so very hard. I’m grateful that I have not given in to that kind of discouragement.

The truth is this: I have no idea. I spend a great deal of time working on At World’s Edge. Although I usually work on several projects concurrently, I spend the bulk of my writing time on the novel. I work on it every day. I think about it constantly. The time I’ve taken to finish certainly isn’t due to a lack of inspiration.

Many people who don’t write think that when you sit down to write a novel, it flows out of you and onto the page in a fairly linear manner, and once you reach the end, you’re done! But in reality, there is much more to it than that: there’s the necessity of plotting, of creating a viable premise, of revision, of editing, and of persuading several people to be beta readers — and then revising based on that beta reading — and so on. I’m lucky that I have a lot of time to devote to these endeavors.

I have a significant portion of the novel written in first draft form for the second time. I nearly completed a prior first draft before realizing the story belonged to a different character (other than my original main character), and so I’ve essentially almost written this book twice from scratch. I’m lucky to have a great group of fellow writers who critique each chapter. If not for them, the process would be much more difficult.

No writer likes to be pinned down to a launch date, because so many things can derail the process. But I hope to finish the bulk of the writing and be through the editing stage (if not the revision stage) by the end of 2015. I hope you’ll stick with me by then so that you can read what all this hype is about!



How to Help Your Writer Friends

People sometimes ask me what actions they can take to support my writing. I think many writers probably face this discussion now and then.

I know this partly because in this blog’s previous incarnation, I wrote about this in a post that became the most popular post I’d ever written (sadly, that incarnation went down a black hole). So now, I give you the updated version of how to help your writer friends. This list is in no particular order.

These suggestions apply whether or not your friend’s book is traditionally or independently published.

1. Read your friend’s book. Obviously, you’ll want to either buy or borrow the book in order to do this.

2. Write a review on a popular book site like Amazon, Goodreads, or Barnes and Noble. Reviews are incredibly important in the marketing of a book. In this day and age, much of the automated marketing that the big sellers like Amazon do is triggered by a book garnering five-star reviews. They do not have to be lengthy — in fact, just one sentence or phrase can be completely adequate. And you don’t have to buy the book through the website where you leave your review.

3. Recommend the book to other readers.

4. Ask your librarian to get the book if your library does not have a copy.

5. Give your copy to a friend and ask him/her to write a review on Amazon, Goodreads, etc.

6. “Like” the book’s page on Amazon. To do this, look for a “like” button near the title and click it.

7. Have your book club (if you have one) read and discuss the book. Invite the author to participate.

8. Leave a comment on your friend’s blog (like this one!).

9. Post a link to the book on whatever social media sites you use — Facebook, Twitter, Reddit, whatever. Tell people there what you thought of the book.

10. Ask your local independent book store if they carry the book, and if they don’t, ask them to.

Most writers would be very happy if you did any one of these things. Even just telling the writer that you read their work can have an amazingly positive effect.


Five Things That Can Boost Your Creativity

It’s never any fun to sit in front of a blank computer screen, knowing that you’ll never reach your word count goal for the day. But unless you’re a citizen of Ladonia, you probably suffer from uncreative bouts, like me. I have discovered – by necessity, and through years of writing – several ways to kick my creativity into gear, even when the creative gods seem to be sleeping. Here are my top five methods for flipping that switch to boost your creativity when inspiration seems elusive:

  1. Brainstorm: It doesn’t matter what you brainstorm about. For me, it’s actually better if I brainstorm about something that doesn’t have to do with my story’s plot. Write down ten ideas for a new book, and then put those away while you start writing on your current project. Or brainstorm about the future of water. The topic is irrelevant. When I do this, the energy used while brainstorm spills over into my writing.
  2. Keep good company: Creativity breeds creativity. I’ve made a conscious effort to surround myself with people who are creative on a regular basis. It really does rub off, I think. While other writers (like Hugh Howey) do inspire me to buckle down and get to work, I find that more creativity rubs off on me from visual artists (potters, filmmakers, painters, etc.) and musicians, especially classical musicians. People like Ann Lindell, Jay Wiese, Ellen Knudson, Joshua Ingle and Kate Hanson.
  3. Play music: Listening to good, non-verbal music can be especially effective at boosting my creativity when I have a specific kind of scene to write. I listen for a few minutes before I start to write the scene, and sometimes turn the music off when I’m actually writing. For example, when I’m writing a battle scene in a story about Vikings, there is nothing like listening to Wagner’s Ride of the Valkyries to get me going, or even Greig’s In the Hall of the Mountain King.
  4. Write regularly: The more I write on a schedule, the more control I develop over my ability to bring out my creativity. Like most writers, I struggle with my writing schedule. This is known as  “butt-in-chair syndrome,” and is beautifully described and illustrated by Claire Legrand here. If I can consistently write at the same time of day for several weeks in a row, my creative muscles and my ability to turn off my internal editor get stronger.
  5. Seek out a very dull environment: I discovered this one in college. I lived in a dorm, and did my laundry in a laundromat in the basement of the building, frequently at midnight, when no one else was there. I would take a writing pad (this was before the days of laptops!), and as the white noise of the running machines lulled me nearly to unconsciousness, I found that the only way to entertain myself was to write. Given the lack of stimulation, my brain took itself on flights that it otherwise wouldn’t have.

These methods work for me. I’ve also heard from other writers that hunger also works – or the stark realization that you just have to do something to bring a little money in. That kind of pressure seems to have the opposite effect on me, though I do tend to respond to deadlines well if presented in the right ways. Another popular method I’ve heard about is taking a hot shower, since many people do some of their best thinking there. I’ve used this to get myself started as well. However, the methods in my top five tend to be more reliable for me.

It all boils down to knowing yourself and what makes you tick. I hope my little list is useful to you. Keep a look out for a future post on Five Things That Can Kill A Writer’s Creativity.


Spike Jonze’s take on love in the age of technology

I saw the Spike Jonze movie Her yesterday. It’s about a writer named Theodore (Joaquin Phoenix) who falls in love with Samantha (Scarlett Johansson). Samantha is an intelligent operating system. The movie takes place a few years in the future, when programmers have mastered the creation of artificial intelligence (AI).

Essentially, Samantha speaks to Theodore just as a real woman would, but she has no physical body. The movie is technically science fiction, but it’s what I like to call “Sci-fi-light”, since there are only a few things that are different about the world, and for most purposes, it is our present-day world.

I found the movie’s concept fascinating even before I saw it. The writing is well done. The pace is a little slow, but it does give the viewer time to get her head around some of the ideas it presents. In fact, it almost immediately reminded me of Jonze’s ex-father-in-law’s movie Lost in Translation. Samantha is the first intelligent operating system, and in the beginning she knows little about humans. Theodore teaches her many things, including how to love. Her AI abilities allow her to grow and evolve into much more than just an OS, encompassing a range of emotions and complex thought, and [SPOILER ALERT] she eventually grows beyond Theodore. She ends up leaving him, choosing instead to devote her attention to a group of AI systems that include an artificial Alan Watts. As Samantha and Theodore break up, she reveals to him that she is in a relationship with 8,316 other people.

The film deals with a number of relevant themes. One that fascinated me was the question of whether we can have legitimate emotional relationships with non-living entities. One might argue, “Of course we can, and already do,” while pulling an iPhone out of a pocket. But Jonze extends the concept far beyond anything Siri can do when Samantha arranges for a real woman to act as a physical surrogate for her when she (Samantha) has a sexual encounter with Theodore. Jonze seems to be warning us that our obsession with technology could one day blight our ability to form romantic attachments with our own kind (if it hasn’t already).

Jonze explores other themes, such as how to navigate a fast-changing world on the multiple levels of love, technology and culture; what is real and what is “artificial”; and what does it mean to accept our lovers exactly as they are?

At its root, however, Her is a love story. In that regard, it succeeds, although those who like a tidy ending with characters getting what they need and want will be disappointed. But it’s a love story that may hit some viewers close to home, and might not be as far off or as far out as many of us think.

Watch the film’s trailer here.


Fifty Things I’ve Learned

Today is my fiftieth birthday. Because of that, here’s a partial list of what I’ve learned in the last fifty years. I normally don’t like aphorisms, preferring instead to just live life in the moment. But this occasion seemed to call for it. These are in no particular order, and really are only numbered because I like numbers. And there’s no end to what I’ve left out — it’s been a long fifty years, after all.

  1. Change is easier in small increments.
  2. Writers write. (Everything else is just pretense.)
  3. Support groups can benefit you beyond your wildest dreams.
  4. Being kind is more important than being right.
  5. It’s okay to write crappy first drafts.
  6. There really isn’t anything on that phone that is as important as you think it is.
  7. It doesn’t matter whose fault it is.
  8. It doesn’t matter if your house isn’t clean if your eyesight is so bad you can’t see it.
  9. The health care industry knows much less than it thinks it does.
  10. I have everything I need to be happy.
  11. Do it now. You never know what tomorrow will bring.
  12. Politics is not like The West Wing.
  13. There’s no such thing as writer’s block.
  14. Annoying people can be good teachers if you listen hard enough.
  15. Storytelling makes great therapy.
  16. Working quietly from the inside is sometimes just as effective as raising hell from the outside.
  17. Sometimes you just have to raise hell.
  18. Life without art is like a meal without food.
  19. Eventually, no one will remember you. Really.
  20. There aren’t really any good reasons to have a gun in your house.
  21. Encouragement is more important than criticism.
  22. Most meetings are a colossal waste of time.
  23. Good friends are hard to come by. Be open enough to accept them.
  24. Saying goodbye sucks. Take time to do it right.
  25. I am not my career. Neither am I my limitations.
  26. Many types of insurance are scams. As in Vegas, the odds will always be against you.
  27. Plants have feelings.
  28. A good editor can save a crappy manuscript.
  29. I have something to say.
  30. The Little Prince was right.
  31. Eventually, you are going to need that health insurance you pay for. Health is temporary.
  32. Everything is temporary.
  33. Addiction is among the worst diseases in existence.
  34. Every logical system of thought is based on at least one statement that must be taken on faith. However, it’s best not to confuse this with religion.
  35. Sometimes doing the right thing is incredibly unpopular.
  36. When people are opposed to doing the right thing, it is almost always because of fear.
  37. Everyone carries a little bit of the divine within them.
  38. Sugar can be a powerful motivator, regardless of age.
  39. You can get by in your career by writing code until you turn 40. Then you have to learn how to talk to people.
  40. Yep, that college degree was worth it, and more.
  41. Sometimes there is no right thing to do.
  42. People with integrity are rare, and worth holding onto.
  43. Bees are necessary, even if I don’t like them.
  44. Courtesy is never wasted breath.
  45. The most important words to learn in any language are “please,” “thank you” and “excuse me”.
  46. I’m not really all that different.
  47. The Law of Large Numbers is the coolest thing in mathematics.
  48. Telling people they are stupid doesn’t make them any smarter.
  49. Cultivating an aptitude for compassion does more to change your life than a lot of other self-improvement methods.
  50. Adversity builds strength, as long as it doesn’t happen all at once.

Positive Spin

Welcome (back) to my blog. It may look like a light version of the old Subsequent Chapters, and I wish I could assure you that it is not.

I like to put a positive spin on things. So let’s not get into the details of the obliteration of my old site or what I think of certain versions of WordPress. Let’s just say I’m back in business with this iteration of my online home. Yes, just that.

I’m glad you’re here.